jueves, 17 de junio de 2010

BLOG 7: GRAMMAR REVIEW

One day, a boy found a strange rock, his name was Tony. He thought that it could be a beautiful present for his grandmother. Next day he visited her. In the street to the house he saw a strange being between the trees. He approached to it, and he discovered an alien! Tony thought that this being was awful and bad, but he was wrong. He looked for the rock; and Tony said him that he had it. Suddenly, they heard a big sound in the wood…… It was the enemy of the alien, “Badman”. Badman wanted the beautiful rock to control the universe. Then, Tony and the friendly alien run. Then, the alien advantage to say his name to Tony: Pichiruchi. They run for a long time, while Badman looked for the rock. Tony didn’t know that Badman killed his grandmother. He was the worst of the worst. Next day, Tony and Pichiruchi went to the house, and they found a letter, it said: I want the rock, if you don’t give me it, I will destroy the world. You don’t know that with this object…….. You can revive people. Now, the problem was that Badman left no trace of the grandmother.

5 comentarios:

  1. Hello Mario!
    Very good story, I think you have many skills to create entertaining stories, I liked a lot, especially the names of the characters.
    Take care!
    Kisses....bye!

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  2. hi mario! I think that your narrative story is very funny and you really have skill for to create stories very interesting. the allien´s name ( "pichiruchi")is very comic.
    congratulations mario for your talent!
    see you!
    bye friend!

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  3. Congratulations Mario! admmiro your imagination and writing.
    Hopefully one day with that mind-based think something important in our career

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  4. Hello Mario!
    That good story, you're very creative, especially by the name of your character Pichiruchi

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  5. Comments
    -RAN
    -ADVANCED to tell the name
    -if you DON´T GIVE IT TO ME

    cRAZY AND UNUSUAL STORY

    Teacher

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